The Fractured Dominion - Reviews

I really want to ask if someone know the raw name of this novel. because I really like MMORPG novels, it's just that most of them are trash.sooooooooooooooooooooo

The Synopsis is interesting...I liked how the story started...The author's choice of words is splendid...I'm eager to know how the story ends. I Hope Dean & Rhianne have a happily ever after...Great Job, & Well written, Author!

Hello, I'm starting this story cause I dound it fun, so if you like it please send your review and let suggestions in the comments sections, your comments are always a motivation!

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"How do you do it? Teleportation, magic, or machinery?" batman asked.

"Lepaskan aku." Tangannya menepis genggaman Akira dengan kuat.

"Witchcraft?" He said before pulling the stone from the wall. Right after pulling, the young man almost kneel down from an invisible pressure coming from the stone. The young man lip turn into smirk as he clench the stone in his hand, the visible pressure crumbled as an intense force assault it.

"...Yes…"

The whole situation was incredibly emotionally taxing! Wrath from his girlfriend's infidelity, rage from not getting revenge, indignation from being forced into a contract, exhilaration from the possibility of gaining superpowers, vexation from being talked down to by some stupid kids, and irritation from not being able to take out all his pent-up anger!

"Yes father" Chrodeas gulped as he said those words.