I am sucker for a strong heroines who don't become sappy the second hero sees them. The writing is well done. The grammar is cared for. What's not to like?
This book is full of nonsense with a spiteful evil protagonist with no brain. It uses cliche and arbitrary ranking systems to isolate the protagonist that come from nowhere to transparently manipulate the plot rather than give actual scale. Especially to try to justify his antisocial plot based on the literal theft of the lifeblood and talent of others sight unseen. Then to keep you from thinking about how he crippled a person at least as far as the character should know it creates a crises so the main character can be the hero. A transparent and trash manipilation. The farthest thing from feel-good.
The story starts off all right the grammer is not the best and the flow is not great either. The MC has no talent in magic and becomes an aura user which is a nice change of pace. And then it is all ruined when the author gives a system to the MC. Yea completely ruined it for me and the thing was the MC was progressing fine and was actually a very talented aura user. So the author had no need to have a system.
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Well, I get its military fiction as the previous reviewer mentioned and I like it. I often bookmarked such novels but never got to read one because it didn't hook me, this one on the other hand starts easy and you don't have to read through tons of world building chapters from the start, it has nice and one of the kind humour so I will stick with the author to see what's next, not to mention it's his first work so im expecting he will grow at a great pace as an author.
This novel was one of a kind. The kind that inspires me to write more. The grammar, well let's just say more wisdom and knowledge to the author to create perfect English grammar. The same also with me ?. So this review was to encourage the author not to give up. The best is yet to come and I know you will become the best version of yourself. Kudos and good luck! Awesome story so far!
Killing him with every attack. Caressing his point of pleasure, could not be so bad that they were babies and that the one and the other, take care of each other.
When I listened to what the entity spoke my normally grey dull eyes gave of a gleam of intrest towards this being for him to get all of that just my staring at me. It was like it was staring deep into my soul.
"Stop your suffering? Okay." Arthur flipped Chris over and pulled his neck back. An iron claw of a hand clamped on his throat and he tried, with no avail, to resist with the one arm he had left. Arthur picked him up and carried him to the edge of the Arena. "Hasta la vista, babay." He dropped Chris into the ring of spikes and watched as the body was impaled by many wooden stakes.
Fu Hongxue tahu. Jika seseorang bernafsu setelah terlalu banyak, dia akan segera menua. Keinginan adalah rasa sakit terbesar yang bisa diketahui manusia.
