The Four Empires - Reviews

I like how the story flows. There are not many cliches even though this is a system Apocalypse novel. If you combine these 2 genres then you will probably see many same types of outcomes but different types of titles. Very satisfied as of now.

Spoiler Alert:Chap 137-138Gets an item from the game to turn invisible. Save a neighbor girl from 2 armed assassins.That same day, author wrote love this and love that then they sealed the deal in bed.Wow.Anyways, a major turn down for me. Decided to quit reading it. Not much development, just a guy fast lvling usng cheat monsters.The author mish mashed the contents trying to make it emotional, mysterious and funny but failed. It's too fast paced for its own good it cant maintain a good storyline.No parents.Sick sister.In debt.A broken gaming helmet.An op ingame cheat.Easy money. Millions to Billions. Beats the military and other secret organizations in the missions of the game.Writer under estimates the military too much.They can check your bank accts. especially that you made millions of money and that you are not yet a bonafide citizen of a high end energy city. You're from the slums.It was good at first, can tolerate it. But the addition of secret police/military/organization in a somewhat light hearted storyline, gehhhh.the additional of very fast romance is gehhhhh.the addition of making virtual iyems real is gehhh..this is considering the fact that the vmmorpg is not yet fully developed to the point that it's passable as a game that adheres to 100% reality.gehhjj...I'd say a letdown after the first 100 chapters. it has potential but mehh.

-A decent, albeit cliche, premise. -A generic daily check in style system that always gives an item he'll need. I find myself thinking about what I would do on each room instead of what the dumb MC does. It's not that the MC is stupid, he is just slow and reckless. No thoughts, head empty, but not stupid. I hope that makes sense.Other than the middle of the road plot and cookie-cutter characters the quality of the writing is nice.

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What an interesting story, the pace of the chapters are also good, we just need more chapters... Advice to the author, you can try reading some other author's stories, you could gain more ideas.

Thanks for the update and for the record I have to go to the office and I will be there at baka bawal HAAHHAHA to get the plates and napkins and I will be there at baka

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