The Forsaken Heiress: Born of the Supreme God - Reviews

Ok, I finished reading this in raws and the story gets really bad in the second half. It has around 350 chapters and the first 150 are pretty good and seem to be gearing up to become a 1000 chapter novel, but after 200 you start to notice problems. There's a lot of nationalism involved and it was hard to sit through even though I'm used to it at this point. Then after 250, the pacing starts getting really bad and entire plot points set up before are discarded or brushed through casually. Important characters forgotten, author rushes to end the story in one of the worst endings I've seen and I say this having read all kinds of bad endings over the years.I can see why this is pretty popular right now because the first half is decent, but the latter half was terrible.

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Another half axx novel.My expectations is pretty low for any trial novel on this platform nowadays........................................

It looks interesting and I like the fact that the protagonist is old, hopefully that makes him smarter!!!!!                                       

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After about chapter 830 its just older chapters released as what the chapter claims an anti piracy measure but makes it unreadable as they were never updated a shame as this was a very good book

There is a really funny book that has a very shady system. The system is rather funny with its antics. All in all it's a rather fun book to read

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loved the book so far....waiting for future chapters...?❤️u200d?♥️

"Who do you think you are? Daring to go against the rules. When I say I will talk with her in private that means that only the two of us will talk. It doesn't matter who you are." The guard was very angry, now that he finally saw a chance to enjoy himself with such a beauty a brat was trying to stop him.

"Please.  They'll hear you."  whispers Lodestone.

"You seemed oddly out of it today." Liam stood up the drama from earlier sobering him. He took the glass from her hand and began drying it.  "You want to talk?"