The Forgotten Shadow - Reviews

this is a very good story.. .. good plot development ...... just the appropriate amount of everything ... .action, drama, ***, ect... i hope we get to see emotional development of character in upcoming chapters and this will be a perfect novel. ..EAGERLY WAITING FOR FURTHER UPDATES

A great short novel. I enjoyed it. Thank you to the author for his work and good luck to you in other books!...............................................

be honest with me, personally i would get a summoner class with mass summoning skills and just level up a skill at has a massive amount of monsters and the level of the skill is the level of the monsters... then i would just let them run wild... anyone else???

A fresh take on an overly explored VRMMO genre . Very little information about the world as of now , but I'm sure that it will be very interesting . ( Review at chapter 17 ) Positives : 1) Solid grammar 2) Interesting world premise 3) No dumb clichès Hopefully the author shifts gears and zooms into a super story ??

was searching something like this for so long Je suis content d'avoir trouvé quelque chose de génial, je vais le terminer en une nuit! ⏱️?

I can’t really say it is a bad book but the prose is horrible.Many sentences are useless and serve no purpose whats so ever,For example it is once stated that the house is dark because there were no lights and the night was dark, I mean no **** Sherlock.

A solid read, but incredibly annoying. Word padding is just purposely insulting at this point.This novel did almost everything right when it comes to it's premise.An immortal doing cultivation just not to be killed or die due to stupid reasons. MC has a whole concept and philosophy of life based on that. Anyway, characters are done nicely, MC is beyond perfect for what the premise says (he's the definition of caution), the world building is a continuous process. The development and where the story is going is interesting.I can say almost everything is as it should be.HOWEVER, THE WORD PADDING!!! I don't know how this novel even was approved and published and translated to English. The word padding and repeating is so annoying. Pick any random chapter, and you'll see the same idea repeated a dozen times. Author says progress of the novel is slow and developments take their time, but it's actually just a lot of useless unnecessary expanding and repeating the same exact thing a million times. If you ignore all the word padding and repeats, then the development is actually decent and even fast. The word padding made it just awful. I haven't read something that does worse word padding than this in a long time.

"Why do I feel like the kid looked a lot more like the other man than his father?"

The monster had healed but it continued to look towards the dust cloud and ignored Izuku, the hand guy just gave a glance towards Izuku's punch before continuing to look at the dust cloud. Izuku started to look at the dust cloud after finishing his actions as well.

[Host there are a lot of things I do not know, as I have only been given some knowledge about this world, in order to help allow you the Host to develop an understanding. Other than that, I am just as clueless about this world as you are, meaning I too will learn and improve with you...]

"Masuklah. Ganti pakaianmu." ucapnya penuh perhatian. Yoona masih menatapnya diam. Tidak melangkah sedikitpun dari hadapannya. Melihat gadis itu yang tidak bereaksi sedikitpun, Sehun pun membuka pintu kamar Yoona lalu mendorong gadis itu masuk kedalam kamarnya. "anggap saja aku sudah gila. Karena setelah ini, aku tidak akan menahannya lagi. Semua yang aku pikirkan dan aku rasakan, akan aku katakan padamu. Akan kulakukan apa yang ku inginkan, padamu." katanya sebelum menutup pintu tersebut.

I finally arrive at the school. "FINALLY!!! That took WAY too long!