Terrible everything, no world building, no character depth, bad translation, cliche story, there's nothing redeeming about this, please don't give these translators another project.
This review is done on the app (disclaimer):Overall this story is better than about 89% of the the stuff the professional writers on this site put out. All I can say is give it a try, if you are on this site any cliche this story uses should not bother you that much.
Good book. Try read it first. MC is not dumb & he is humble. The system is quite new for me, but I would rate it 4/5. Give it a try. You might enjoy it.
Hey I would like to say I absolutely love your novel! I have read all of the chapters available. The story and characters are incredible. The only thing I wish was different was the amount of chapter being released a week. However if your feeling burntout then I could see why you want to post less, either way I hope to read more chapter soon!-Light
"Ah... It has all finally ended. It's time for a new beginning and this time, Jaselle can't run away anymore... Tsk.. Tsk... Tsk..." Jason thought cunningly in his mind, as if harbouring some evil plans.
You hear the CRUNCH of broken glass and instantly wince. You didn't see it in the faint darkness of the room, but you might have if you had taken your time and looked around.
"HAHahahaha. .haha ..hehe....Ok I'm calm now heh. Sam if you can give me almost anything I want then...."Alina started to lower her voice to a wispier.
