Started off ok then just got unbelievable when he became a Danvers, how many families/companies hated them. Then came all these different women who he was infatuated plus Clingy Karen very irritating causing him his head in the clouds doing stupid things making him into an idiot.
Remarkably interesting. The novel was light at first but it keeps on progressing into more exciting events. Just keep an eye on the punctuations. Even if you're not a native speaker of the English language, you did a great job.
Hey, Author..can you continue the story.. For ME, your novel is fun and amazing.. I hope you can update more and put some more romance and action in the plot ????
I've read the raws, and this is perhaps on of the bests. Its basically release that witch, but in a cultivation world. Characters are nice, and the mc actually has a brain, without having Wikipedia like memory.
