The First Experience Between Childhood Friends - Reviews

Already at ch-50 and only 3 days passed  nothing too unusual happened. Too slow pace from my opinion . System has no value in MC eyes and he sees it as annoyance. No desire of making a harem in MC mind till now( perhaps it will change in coming chapters) . I think it's mature of him to think thoroughly about his situation and make decisions. Mc personality is too bland.I know it's only 3 days passed but it took 50 chapters and too much progressing in MC personality is not possible but it's frustrating to see nothing happens. Something interesting should happen in coming chapters otherwise I don't know I can continue reading this novel. It's like reading filler chapters,  information of something significant is too few .

Well, I really want to give you full stars but even you said what you're not good at in your own review, even through all that you're still one of my favourite author here in WN, I just hope you keep doing what you're doing, and improve of course, and you'll be good, I really think this is one of the best stories out there, thank you for writing this and your other novels too, especially with what the world is going through right now...

I liked what I read on this site, so I went for the raws. Unfortunately, I found the novel just does not live up to it's potential. I'd say that after a certain chapter, the novel becomes 70%+ about the interaction between the MC and his wife and them just making everyone around them jealous. Also, the MC becomes a hopeless simp. For a while the whole relationship is cute and a welcome change to other novels, but then the balance breaks and it becomes the driving force of the novel. Anyways, if you prefer a slice of lice novel with some cultivation and comedy, you could do worse than this one.

I must say your writing is among one of the best I have ever read. The way you slowly describe the situation and normal conversation between the character is so refreshing. The story is good so far too. I would love to read more. keep up the good work. .

This book is quite intense. There's a lot of plot development and the characters are interesting.  Can't wait to see where the author goes with this story.

Now that I think about it, Mad Snail really deserve his name. You guys knows, with him being MAD, to not care about complains and kept updating his novel chapter as slow as SNAIL.

Louise rushed to her desk and continued her work as Randolph opened his office door for me "Come in".

When Gray pulled the spear he had kicked out towards the mans chest.

Then the cool wind hit her face. Her mind came back to earth. Then wiped the tears on her face. She didn't even know when the tears begun to flow. She stood still until she heard a grumbling. She wondered what it was and she remembered it was her stomach. She  was hungry. She better rush home before her sister Yang mi finds out that her she was out walking on the beach alone. She watched the ocean one last time and turned to walk back home. Her adopted parent's home.

I wonder if she's sulking from what I did to Solange-san? It couldn't be helped though, since Solange-san was unconscious.

"But what if you're wrong, Jess?" I interrupted her. "What if she didn't like me all along. What if she genuinely liked Kason and she just felt awkward about hanging out with me after she saw me preoccupied with you?"

"What do you mean by 'why'"