The First Ancient Immortal - Reviews

Okay, I'm going to be completely honest here. I'm not much of a reviewer but I'll give it a try. The title attracted me here but I was skeptical after I saw the genre.I mean yeah it had the name of one of my favorite protagonists in Its title but I thought, should I read a novel like this just because it had the name, Ragnar? Then I gave the first chapter a try with the aim of leaving it once it wasn't to my taste but I was shell-shocked by the unexpected familiarity with the Vikings movie.I had to check once again to confirm if I wasn't reading fanfic but still the author was able to develop a wonderful novel that just shows how much he loves and knows about the world of Vikings.Writing quality is top much with no grammatical errors so far as I have read which is sadly 40+ when compared to the current 89 chapters it has.I've been glued to my seat ever since I started.Update stability is pretty good as it is consistent.Character development is just wonderful as we follow the growth of both Tyr and Bjorn.The novel is just spectacular as I  it makes it easier for me to visualize a lot of the characters in the novel, enabling the world background to flow easily to the story. Love how you were able to give so many characters enough screen time in the novel.Even lagertha also ??

I swear to God, this is at  least one of the 5 most infuriating translations I have ever read in my life. And this is coming from someone that's read several MTLs before. My goodness. The level of cringe in almost every sentence is so mind blowing, it's not even funny. The mc is just straight out bland, the writing is a complete mess with all the errors and the worldbuilding is still a mystery to me.

This an excellent read but the updates are just bad and not consistent at all, only if they update more...Even though I think you should read it and plzzzzzzzz vote vote vote it is the least we can do thnx

Would really like this book to continue as it was an awesome read! I have enjoyed the world that’s being built up so far and others who have read more of this only leave me wanting more based on their reviews.

I hope I can read it before I graduate which is next week!!! THIS IS SUCK A LOVING STORY!!!! I love how there is the characters that is in the story and how strong the love in this story is.I hope to see Elizabeth giving birth so I hope there is something like that!!!

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10/10 would recommend was just awesome all I can use to describe it

Lam rolled across the floor and stabbed his fingers into the snow layered ground and stopped. Heavy breaths heaved from his mouth as he closed his eyes in relief. His fingers were freezing and snow dug into in fingernails, crumbled leaves decorated his long hair, and his grey sheepskin cloak dirtied with powered white and sweat. He flopped onto his back and stayed still, pain lingering throughout his body.

I love this novel jejeje need more chapters

Of course the Badger would never do anything to directly cause harm to the Unicorn. She was just sour because she had thought her stripes should be the most striking and beautiful feature of all the animals.

john replied "Are you beginning stage to get mad, soon tell with her, otherwise we can't see that you are doing crazy shit like smiling alone and talking like blah blah blah"

"Yeah, what he said, c'mon kid we've only got ten months, follow me."