The Fermi Paradox (1) - Reviews

If you are in a Gunfight what will you use a gun or fist? @#$% System already told MC that his opponent is stronger but the stupid MC still use fist. R.I.P. common sense

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Not bad, could use some more work. Fanfic is reincarnation, MC dies and meets god. Grammar is ok, writing style is a little annoying but readable. Updates are constantly. World building is meh, it’s there but not explained. Story is ok, would be better to see more original stuff.

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in pile of trash I found gold trully  a novel of my test

Mia also said that she is smelling something like rotten meat in her room . Her friends were surprised as they were  not able to smell anything . One of the friends said in broken voice "this is sign of paranormal presence ''. As it was late no one dared to wake up Mia's parents  but decided to sleep with lights on.

"No you go ahead I'll come with Chriselle

Fed to the rules and I hit the ground running

I ran towards her. I started to take deep breaths as I had nearly lost all of my stamina.

At the moment of this review, I read until chapter 100. my opinion is very simple: a interesting story butchered by a horrible machine translation. just to be clear, the translation is: garbage, trash, horrible, disgusting, amusing, ridiculous, poetry. the amount of comments in the first few chapters is ok, but after 50 almost everyone dropped this novel. it doesn't matter how good is the story, the translation is garbage.