The Fallen of the Goddess - Reviews

Dang a great zombie novel.. Good character development although a fast pace it's still a form of originality.hahjsjfkfjrjrjejahsudufurkrmrmrmemmejejdjcucufjr

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I liked a lot this novelIn fact , the fantasy spirit discusses many topics and givethe readers an idea how far we can go with our imagination ..i liked alsow the twist part ...it plays a huge part in the excitement factor ...i believe that alwats the twist part is a big indication of the creativity of the author and its potentials in coming up always with new and unexpected ideas .i didn t finish reading yet but i highly believe that i won't be disappointed at all.. because as they say practice makes perfect ....so the more the better...we can add as a notice that many properties expresses how big is the role that plays the passion in the writing side of the author..it is transfered within each word and each idea...this couldn't been anything but a sighnificance of the limitless capabilities af a writer...nothing but the beetter luck..I hope i didn t spoil any of the syory told .I gave this review because i m trying to give readers the enthusiasm to read for this author ...it shouldn t be missed at all

From the characters to the plots Everything is intriguing Nice work Pls keep updating

flashback- The forest and the guildhall he was in turned into a hellhole, full of fire and bones of humans. He saw the members of the Spriggans in front of him and Natsu felt anger spread through every fibre of his being. Natsu's dark green eyes turned blood red again. The landscape returned to the guildhall and forest, but he saw all the members of the guild to be Spriggan soldiers. flashback end-

When are you updating next

Amazing story, lots of good interactions between the mc and the side characters. Everything generally seems like its fits within the story. However the biggest issue with this story has to be the alters as they came out of nowhere and they honestly take away more from the story than they add. Honestly if they just suddenly disappeared in any of the chapters than I’d be happier.

It's nice with great potential so keep it up

Hidden gem, you should check this out. Author knows how to cook so trust the process. Keep up the good work and frequent updates, looking forward to more! ?