THE FALLEN DIVINITY - Reviews

Leaving this review because I am in love with your book author. I know many people are not reading it yet but don't lose hope. It's going to be a blast.

I haven't read the novel. I also like many others clicked simply because it looks like Subaru wearing a Dragon ball god of destruction garment with a pocket dimension in his hand that is holding Marvel's Galactus

When will this book get full release......Oh my gosh!!!!! I have and will spent ALL my Energy Stone on this Book for Now!!!!!⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡

I see nothing wrong bc it such a great, great. At first I thought it was one of those simple and similar BL but this one was quite different. Maybe it’s bc I haven’t read a lot more yet but this is a great piece that I enjoy very much.

Splendid writing skills. Quite immersive, I thought I was the one the creature was talking to. Also, how he stated the system status is marvelous! Keep it up!

"Minato..." Kushina said Noticing How tired he was

*Remember, this review is based on the first 5 chapters*Constructive Criticism: I saw "Don't read this story. It's not worth your time." as the synopsis, I would only use something along similar lines if you dropped the novel, and then you should include the word dropped somewhere in the synopsis. Also, if you did drop the novel, I'd suggest publishing a new chapter saying such then deleting all the other chapters due to how short the story is as is. Two months is too long for a web novel unless on hiatus, and then such should be made clear.;,;. The plot felt slow, I am not really sure what to say about that though.;,;.Positive Feedback: Your world building is progressing at a good rate in comparison to your plot, and I really like the character development.Personal Feedback: I thought the story was too slow. I can see that there is a decent plot coming together, but I still can't begin to see the next milestone due to the lack of speed, thus I will not be continuing this story.

Across Meng Shui, his opponent was holding his wound with pale face staring at him with pure horror.

My nosebleed not coming out is close to a miracle

You'll never shine if you don't glow

I felt a stun in my heart. So the man sitting so nobly on the throne was to be my husband, upon whom I shall depend for my entire life? I saluted again and then retreated back into the line. Meizhuang were smiling brilliantly to me and I did back to her, but at this moment I felt at a loss what to deal with the unexpected result of being chosen. Having finished our rounds, we, upon the instructions of the eunuch of etiquette, kowtowed to their majesties and then followed out of the hall in sequence. The moment we were out, a noise came from behind, which turned out to be Fangchun Ye, the girl in our line just now, who already fainted out, looking rather pale and sweating on her forehead. It must have been her failing to be chosen that made her extremely sad and therefore passed out. I sighed: "Those who wished to stay ended up in vain, while I the other way round." By this time, Ye was already carried away by the eunuchs and maids serving by the door of the hall.

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