The Fallen Death Dog - Reviews

so far it's very good and i'm involved in the story if you disregard the english errors it's ok but the bad thing is the delay to release new chapters

overall I really enjoy the story the characters keep you entertained and on your toes the only problem is they can't keep the gender straight in the storyline they keep swapping everybody's gender around and it's quite annoying

Another crappy novel words are missing here and there in chapters, Over Glorified mc that talks crap to everyone he fights, author stating mc has never retreated from a fight in his entire life of gaming etc and never will here later on mc says he could retreat but doesn't have to, so mc already had a thought process of retreating, also author says at certain power lvl injuries that aren't at the lvl of severed limbs can heal in seconds next chapter a few broken ribs and a crushed hand will take days when chapter before his arm was almost severed healed in seconds etc crap novel

overall it seems like a promising novel to read. the author needs to get a editor or write this in grammarly or something cause the grammar gives me a stroke.

Ahem, cough cough! Just read three chappies of the book, and think it definitely deserves a nice review. Sigh, not many things to criticize the book for, so let's start with praise. The books main character is quite interesting, comedic actions and profane, ahem! vocabulary, make a very good goblin. Not gonna talk much on the death of the protagonist, too comical to be dark. First three chapters were nice with good pacing, narrative and descriptive quality. Although some errors were spotted, those can be fixed easily. The author did a good job with the execution of this story, kudos.

Silly giggles and laughter filled the room.

Internal mana and mana capacity of a mage were the same as body muscles of a warrior. The more they trained them, the faster their internal mana could move and the bigger their mana capacity would grow. The trick was to keep filling them up to the point of bursting out, and then letting them out before repeating the process again and again.

Lora was Xzavier girl best friend, bumalik siya noon sa pilipinas kung kailan naging kami na ni Xzavier. Kinaybigan niya ako pero hindi ko aakalain na may tangka siyang agawin sakin si Xzavier. Ilang beses ko silang nahuli pero nagbulag-bulagan ako pero yung may mangyari sa kanila sumosobra na, kaya ako na mismo ang bumitaw at nakipaghiwalay.

"I'm sorry for disappearing so suddenly. I had to take care of something. As for your question, I usually use the site to get recommendations for good anime's, although I'd be happy to make a new friend."

She wanted to tear off his t-shirt and so he gave her 6 successful slaps stunning her and the shop owner.

Endurance: 23.8