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1.It is quite unbelievable plot that the big families have send their future heads/candidates in such dangerous forest without proper training. Also why are they giving guards! not only these guards are useless can't do their job, they can't even procure food.Even the suppose useless mc is more knowledgeable than them,so they also can't be proper guide. So to me the whole plot is very forced & weakly knitted. 2.Now for the mc. -A ULTIMATE SIMP-Through the whole novel he is simping over beauties.And he is so intelligent that he charges 'magically enhanced delicious food' for 3 silver, when other sells 'normal bland chicken drumsticks' for 10 silver. 3.Moreover it is also kinda 'Sign in' type novel. As we don't clearly understand how he is leveling up(I am talking about the new recipe getting not the system update with gold). Also a gourmet system where u don't even have to cook doesn't go well with me.
i do not know what happen. why this novel is beingvtaken down from trial read and till now i still do not get any refund from webnovel. the rating for this novel is 4.2 but being taken down and the choosen one is getting worse. some 3.6 or less than 4 rating being choosen. wow....
plot gets more and more exciting as story advances! highly recommend.........................................................................................................................................
Wow ? the whole time I was reading this, I was literally pouting. The story is so sad and I love that it is relatable and portrays things that a person may face in their lives or things that their friends face. I believe that whoever reads this book may find solitude and be given hope of not giving up when life is hard, but instead persevering through the trials. Great story. Really really great
Congrats Author you have made a mc so unlikable that I like seeing him weak... you have created something worthwhile to enjoy reading, of course only the weak parts but if you want my honest opinion he's an egotistical hypocrite who thinks everything is his. Not something i'd recommend you to read, the characters are somewhat good except the mc but it's so bad I had to give character design a 1 star. Back to my ratings 5 for writing quality because you know how to make a story work. 3 for stability of updates because i haven't been here long enough. 4 for story development, again a great author. 1 for character design MC. 4 for world background, it was portrayed greatly yet the characters refer weirdly to it. Best of luck author!
personally, l like the book. it has, good characters, realism, character building, a good author, and also is quite satisfying. like when bad people get what's coming. that being death of course. so overall, 8/10 would recommend.
Mora pouted and hugged Amo anyways, despite the small sound of protest coming from the other. Mora tortureously kept him under a tight hug, although it may have been nothing to Amo. He understood.
