The exiled Royal - Reviews

I really  like the story and it has a tingling escapade. The character in this novel is amazing and it's easy to understand  what the plot is.

Its a very original cultivation novel, its strictly kingdom building and about growing a declining clan with a system thats not too overpowered. Enjoyable read if you like cultivation and kingdom building.

Starts great but gets very repetitive over time. Not unsual for its genre, but if you are someone who doesnt like repetitive things then this isnt for you. Finished using mtl(only 600+ chapters) and I can say that the ending was a little bit of a disapointment. It felt like the author didn't know how to further progress the story without having to copy paste from earlier chapters and thus abruptly ended it with a lack luster ending. Overall not bad if you are looking for a novel to pass time but don't expect something great.PS. No Harem/Romance! Yay!

This is one of the higher quality stories. The MC is smart and devious without being a whiny brat. I am liking the character as well as the game design. The Greater plot line is somthing that is missing in many of the other stories on Webnovel. i also apricate that this storie doesn’t feel the need to explain game mechanics and mmorpg terms to death.

The poor children in the heat i didnt get that far in the story but the start is good and sad but good but i still wonder is he going to save that one girl from that thing or jist die there and not save her i am not sure if she lives or dies because i just read the info but i did read the story well the beginning☺

You definitely improved a lot since the last writing. Still feel like you may want to break up dialog with things like explanations and details about the characters. However, much better dialog, this time, and seemed more thought out. I liked the foreshadowing in chapter 4, and liked the romance tidbits. Keep trying to improve in specific areas every chapter, try to make every chapter better than the previous chapter, and hope you find inspiration in the best novels you read.

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"Jin hyung? do you have a crush on Namjoon?" Taehyung asks while everyone isn't paying attention, or so he thinks. Everyone stops laughing and looks at Tae and Jin. Taehyung only asked the question because he saw sadness in his hyung's eyes when Jungkook and Namjoon were making out. "Tae? why are you asking?" Jin asks, an eyebrow raised. "I saw the sadness in your eyes...so I thought maybe you had a crush on Namjoon" Taehyung explains. "it's ok if you do, you can't control who you fall for" Jungkook says. Jungkook knew that Jin was hesitant to answer because of Namjoons and Jungkooks relationship. Namjoon nods in agreement. "Yes, I do have a crush on Namjoon" Jin says looking down playing with his fingers. why did Tae have to be so observant?

The two had forgotten the girls and diad miserably...well they face were covered in paint and they had to cancel their skill. They escaped in hurry and shame.

"Mother, what do you mean by-"

Ah... The pain stopped! Wooh. And my vision is now back.

"Wouldn't you like some coffee?" I urged him.