The Evolving Stealth System - Reviews

I'm the author of this novel, and am shamelessly giving this novel the tenth review....
It's a tough world as an author, and I'll be writing 3 chapters a day, most days, as long as the world is nice to me, and doesn't ruin my writing time!
I write 5 - 10 hours a day, spend more time doing research, and always hope to improve...
As for this novel, Its about Duncan... the main character... as he tries to figure out how to go from a skeleton into a higher more powerful form in order to save his universe from being destroyed...
Hopefully, you can come join me on this journey, and forgive me for taking the tenth review spot!
Its painful seeing a false rating, so... anyways... hope you enjoy the story!

Ok so I'm going to be shameless and just say I don't really understand ANYTHING THATS GOING ON!!! I was thrown into a story that seems like 5 chapters in on the first chapter, and I'm quite confused and it just sort of dragged and dropped me here. I'm not saying it's bad, in fact I quite like it, there is just so little information I'm super confused about it all! Maybe add a couple lines of backstory in the very first chapter to explain what's going on. I mean I can get the gist of it. But it's just really confusing for me

Hello Author, here is my review for you.

Writing Quality - So far i have come to like the way that you write your novel, and there does not seem to be a lot of grammatical issues, which is actually quite a rare thing to see in new novels. Perhaps you have some previous experience writing? Either way, I think you earned the 5 stars I have given you on this area.

Stability of Updates - Obviously 5 stars if you manage to keep up what you have promised. I would not want you to go as far as to release 25 chapters a week though, unless you really believe that you will be able to handle it without ruining the story.

Story Development - I will have to give this 3 stars at the moment as the story is only 7 chapters so far. I will change this based on what happens to the story in the future.

Character Design - I will leave this at 3 stars as well at the moment due to the ****** fact that we have not received a lot of information about our MC. It would be nice to get a prologue that somewhat explains how the life of our MC was before he was reincarnated into a skeleton. This rating will be changed as well once you have a few more chapters out.

World Background - Will keep this at 4 stars, although it is quite like the "Character Design" and "Story Development". We are still missing quite a lot of information regarding the world that he is in and the world he came from. For all I know he could have been an alien in his past life.

The concept is great. But the story flow is so incoherent and random that you have no idea what is happening.

Mc mining ores in a cave, devil girl drops onto his front. Mc running away, stuck in ground 10 feet under. It's so abrupt and random, no transition or explanation.

Half the story mc is talking in his lalaland and readers have to make guesswork all the time what is happening. Is this the flashback or was it happening to mc now?

So, in summary, it's confusing and the author is mostly talking to himself about the key points of the story. It is missing a lot of context and the transitions are not there.

Mc is a spy, but acts recklessly and doesn't listen to system, made specifically to help him infiltrate hell...m'kay now author doing drugs is bad m'kay?

but seriously though, apparently demons have conquered 99% of the universe and 50% of hell so the heavens decided " M8 we know they conquered a lotta land so we decided that you know it's better if we wait until only 51% of everything is free before we do anything because that's reasonable"

anyways, the Mc is a 'spy' I'm assuming he's a pretty competent one since he's the one chosen to infiltrate hell, but then again he could just be sent there so that he'd get out of their hair.

The writing is bland, the characters are bland, if you wanna read a story about angels Vs demons read the bible, though be warned the main character of that story is OP and a total douche sometimes.

anyways Mr.'Author' instead of releasing 3 chapters a day, maybe you should spend more time on your 'research' and polishing which, not to be rude, but i doubt you do much of.

I tried reading this, but it was just way too confusing with the transition of the plot and i was left having no idea what the hell was happening. Im not sure if he has an editor or not but this story sure as hell needs a good one.

I would really like to see this novel continue. After reading it for a while you start to get hooked on. The plot seems to be all over the place and there are many things the author just adds without any explanation. But you are still able to connect everything one way or another

I feel like there are gaps missing between each chapter I'm missing out on. I don't like how the story changes perspective from MC to another mid-chapter too often. I think there is a need for a more descriptive background for the main characters and side characters. Overall good story.

Like the story it's pretty good and I love how the cover picture is a Magic the Gathering card.

I dont know what else to write to reach 140.

realy awesome, i love the mc (little ugly)

I quite liked the story but it gets a bit hectic along chapters +27. After the ancestral transformation everything just went a bit chaotic. I do wish that the author could go more in depth into the mc's backstory as that seems quite interesting. Or he can make it into a flashback. Overall though the story is quite good and I have to say I only wrote this review for more chaps. Also if author sees this review do you have a outline to follow because seeing where the story should end up helps greatly with planning it out for future chapters.

but what a good novel, I like the development of the story, it does not advance neither slow nor fast, it advances at a normal pace, you look like a professional writer, how many levels will there be, will there be 1000 levels? every 100 levels is like a kingdom and when you reach level 1000 you will become a god? the MC will evolve from a skeleton to a zombie, then to a ghoul, then to a goblin, then to an ogre, then to a minor demon, then to a greater demon and then to a supreme demon that has a human appearance and is hermono and has long hair and is it man?