The Eternal Souls - Reviews

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Its amazing. please come back............................................................................................................................

A typical cliché chinese novel with a super arrogant mc, one dimensional characters, and a copied plots.Don't believe me.Try it and you'll understand what i mean.

very nice novel, it's just that during the whole reading time I got so depressed that I even refused to eat fried chicken.You realize !!This story is so existing but at the same time very depressing.Reminds me of Li Qiye

It was pretty decent, up till chapter 40. The translation quality gets significantly worse from chapter 41 onwards.

Good book so far. The only thing that bothers me (besides the grammar which is understandable) is the skill usage. In the boss fights his most useful skill Over limit is only used last minute or not at all? The skill has a 30min duration and a 40min Cooldown why isn’t he using it every time he fights? There’s only a 10min break when he would be “weak.” I would understand using it as a trump card if the skill has a duration of 30 seconds... but 30mins?? The fights seem to last no longer than 5-10mins if you base it off his acceleration skill. It’s just not realistic that the MC gets handed a power boost with no negatives and he doesn’t use it unless he’s close to dying... why even let yourself get that close when you can be safe... after all he can’t respawn!

The author is, after reading some similar material, trying their hand at writing a story of their own. It is very interesting what concepts the author likes to borrow.That being said, I know that it's cool that they have borrowed ideas from the novels they have, are and will be reading and translating such as Eliza, EDCL (experimental... lich), NEET and etc.I praise the author for starting with the rough rock, that which I previously have mentioned in a comment, and working to make this a gem! I looking forward to working, reading, enjoying, being with the author every step of the away.It may seem a little bland at first but I believe the author can and is able to twist this previously precedents into their own unique twist and styleSincerely and yours truly,Sir. Tentacles Shrubs

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This is seriously messed up.                                                                                                                           

A surprisingly funny take on what can be considered a tired genre of webnovels, that being the "alternate world entertainment is lacking so I'll use my original world's ideas to get rich" trope.Sure it's like a lot of other works, but the author has made it just funny enough to keep me reading through the 60 chapter trial read.A highlight of the novel is the side characters, most of whom have no contact with the MC and are just living normal lives while becoming infatuated with the toys. Realistic depictions of kids and how they just so so so so NEED that new toy from the show, and then how to hide it from their parents, teachers, etc.The comedic aspects don't drag down the story, and only pop up every couple of chapters, often in unexpected ways. Like a joke that was innocuously set up a few chapters before a single line pays it off.I will say that the first ten chapters or so were written in a bit too much of an overview style that were a little off putting since it seemed distant and rushed, but after that it settled down and the pacing worked better.

It was really  interesting and good more like a real life experience the plot was really good and enjoyable and for sure i am eagerly waiting for what happens next in the story and keep it up it is a good pass time reading these self made stories whixh are really interesting to reading

"Everyone get together!" I screamed over the roaring wind.