The Eternal Gambit - Reviews

The story was so emotional and fantasy was so good that it reminded me of my childhood memories....the love story was so thrilling i really enjoyed the story.... well-done... appreciated....keep working in it....!

C104After so many months I finally found a cool webnovel. Unlike other novels, this deals with true feelings.First few chapters are lil bit confusing but later on, it goes good. give it a try by reading till vol1(33ch). The turning point of this novel is vol2. The story pace is slow but not boring. I wonder why this isn't it popular. It deserves better than most trash in webnovel.Author more chapters pls, good work.

I genuinely enjoy storys where the mc has a daughter or child at all so I'm waiting on the edge of my seat to see where you take this and I'll be there all the way because its promising so far

This story is about a MC who is talented with the sword but is not able to cultivate which leads to him being labeled as trash (similar to BTTH). The MC overcomes this obstacle and obtains a heavenly cultivation method which allows him to raise his cultivation in a short time and in a sense, is reborned (this is not a transmigration story, which is refreshing).This story is fast paced. The plot goes from betrayal to cultivation breakthrough and power up very fast. The fight scenes are also short, often ending in one sword move. So far, there is a little bit of face slapping, otherwise, the plot seems to point to a bloody revenge early storyline.

lots of cliches + endless luck + plot armor + illogical protagonist + formulaic characters + stupid enemies + endless repetition of the same plots = this novel.  (English is not my native language)

some crazy amount of romance which I hope won't become too much.

Imma be real honest here, I'm a sh1t tier with no stable update schedule and a knack for developing the story on the fly. The only redeeming quality about this novel is that there aren't any Fan-fics about 'invincible saint salaryman' that added onto the fact that I don't have to really build up the world since it already exists to s certain degree. English is my first language so you can understand the quality rating and I'm relatively good at using anime stereotypes and memes.That's about it, so if y'all are still interested thanks for putting up with my sub-par bullsh1t writing skills.

Misty was walking around until she saw Ash sitting on a bench and walks toward him.

Even though he is a lot stronger now, he is still not capable of directly taking on multiple guns, so he didn't want to use his sword and decided to pick the assassins off with his pistol, but that grenade made him change his mind.

I want to kick that guy . he disturb my sleep

"Astagfirullah... Neng, Neng Rina, ya ampun. TOLONG! TOLONG!"

' They're talking about me' that bro tian that she calls isn't he my boyfriend Lingtian? hope his not.