Novel was really solid, translation was good and it held my interest, but the novel was dropped at one point and then switched to terribly edited machine translations.
Premise is interesting and the characters are well described and written. Though there's some grammatical errors, the flow of the story is good. I wish you the best on your book author ?
I really liked the first version, hence my high rating for so few chapters (4). hope this repost gets past the original(67), which is a rare achievement for reposts. good luck, author.
Woah. The sypnosis is short but too strong. The author can easily captured the reader's hearts by just reading the sypnosis. The first chapter is well written. I love how the author wrote the storyline. Keep it up!
I had read over 80 chapters and after that i concluded that the "theo" main character is boring ? their is no fun reading the novel. although I don't know if anything change in future chapters
Excellent work and a very interesting book. The story line is excellent and perfect development with suspense. The only problem is the release rate which is slow. Some people tend to read fast and don't like to wait for long.
His mocking voice and his taunt of fear stung her, but she would not answer and, with a laugh and a shrug, he lot her go, picking up a razor from the table and lounging into the bathroom.
