I give this 5 stars I usually didn't care about mistakes or grammar error. Once I enjoy reading story it excites me the most. Let's back to the story, traveling time, is like a dream come true if you have something you want to change. You can do it just a snap of your fingers. Even if you make a multiple mistakes you can repeat it again and again and change it until it was perfect. I'm excited to know more about your story keep up the good work author!