The story is good till first 700 chapters.In the baltimore arc things start to become illogical and unbelievable. It looks like the author either delegated this to a 10 year old or to an AI at this point.Then the story completely loses the core plotline and key characters are vanished.The key premise of the story of a self made man is replaced by the main hero going full super saayan Goku.After this fiasco continues for around 200 chapters, the author tries to correct course by using a plot device.But even after bringing back the story to earth, it drags on and on. One villain of a city level takes 500 chapters to be defeated. The twists and turns become illogical and key characters behave completely out of character.This attempt of creating "shocking suspenses" do not entertain and only indicate that the author has lost control of the plot.My advise will be to use a plot device to reverse baltimore and start from scratch there sticking to the core messaging
TBH Who cares where the novel ends up. No one sues those other smaller websites for hosting the novels. Maybe Qidian should ask first but having to stop releasing novels here just because another bigger platform/website is suppressing it is just plain bs. In my opinion anyway.Anyway i hope qidian gets to release all those other novels like MArtial God Asura, the first parts of Nine Heaven (or whatever its called), Against the Gods and many many many more.
Thoroughly enjoyable,keeps you on the edge of your seat with every word! You'll find yourself caught up with no thought how much time has passed.Highly entertaining!
I have really enjoyed following the story to its end and have to say that like some of your other works it’s really enjoyable and I do recommend it though like your other works with endings it feels rushed and leaves me highly unsatifaited.
Tbh the story itself is fine. A chapter took many part but the contain is short, it is killing me. That make me didnt want to read anymore. Just take your time man to finish your chapter. I doubt there is 5k words.
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