The Dual Cultivating War God - Reviews

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This is my frist time commenting on a webnovel because this book annoys me the most. I binge read this novel because of the unique system and now I regret it. Sigh. Please add a harem tag. Seriously. MCs becomes the typical MC and every time a beautiful woman appears he helps them instead of sticking to the plot. And out of nowhere, his childhood sweetheart suddenly has a divine physique and the ghost lady suddenly has a royal bloodline. The strong captain "suddenly" has a strong interest in him so he can go to that island and get the inheritance. Are the women here just a tool to push the plot? How annoying.

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Ahem, Author here.First of all I have to thank you for taking the time to check out my work. It means a lot to me.Now, as the author of this book, I am obliged to give a review of my book that points out what you can expect from it.Can you expect superb writing quality? Yes! I personally rate myself quite high(I'm not gonna put a scale), and others have told me that my writing quality is quite decent.Updates will be daily for as long as I can imagine.The story development, as it is with my other books, if you've read them, is decently paces, not going too fast, not too slow.My characters are dynamic, and I hope you can learn to like and understand them as you read them.As for the world background, I have a lot planned out, but you won't see too much of it in the first few chapters, as those chapters focus on our main character, Mian. All I can say it that there is tension between the demi-humans and the humans.I hope you all support me on this exciting journey and that we can all reach our goals together by the end of this journey!

Very interesting story!!!Very interesting story!!!Very interesting story!!!Good work authorIt becomes one of favorite novelPlease update more chapter ?

The Kingdom Building series presents a captivating storyline, but there are certain aspects that require further clarification and development. Allow me to address your concerns regarding the plot:Arquebus:The lack of explanation regarding barrel production and the manual manufacturing of arquebuses raises questions about the feasibility and efficiency of such processes without advanced machinery or smelting techniques.Cannons:The absence of a comprehensive explanation regarding the creation of cannons, especially cast iron cannons, leaves uncertainty about the availability of necessary resources, such as coal, for their construction.Gunpowder:The origin of saltpeter, a vital component of gunpowder, is not adequately addressed in the narrative. It is essential to establish a believable source of saltpeter and sulfur for sustained large-scale ammunition production.Steam Engine:While the introduction of a steam engine is intriguing, the story lacks details about its creation and the protagonist's ability to manufacture precise parts without access to machine tools or advanced engineering techniques.Blackout:The abilities and capabilities of the Blackout group, particularly their exceptional infiltration skills, may seem overly powerful and not fully explained within the context of the medieval setting.Russell:The abrupt transformation of Russell from a peaceful painter to a murderer lacks proper character development and motivation. It would benefit the story to establish dissatisfaction or conflicts within Russell's life before depicting him as someone capable of such actions.Travel:The ease with which characters traverse between different countries without established roads raises questions about the feasibility and time constraints involved. Additionally, the annual meetings of Blackout members, requiring extensive travel, seem logistically challenging in the absence of efficient transportation systems.Overall, while the Kingdom Building series offers an engaging plot, there is room for improvement in providing more detailed explanations and addressing the logical and technical aspects of the depicted time period and technological advancements.

Yang: Realm? Do you mean world? Cause if you say the world that we are in Remanent. How do you not know something a baby even knows.

"Belle let me help you with your books."

"Don't worry about it. You should go into the forest and look for something we could eat out here." She announced like she was trying to get rid of me.

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