FAM MY FAVORITE NOVEL! YO FAM THIS IS THE ONE AND ONLY NOVEL I READ ON THIS SITE SO I PUT ALL OF MY POWER STONES INTO IT. IT IS SO FUN FAM BRO, I RECCOMEND. DRAGON Is SO COOL FAM SO OP COOL FAM FUN FAM. ILY AUTHOR IF YOU DROP THEN ILL HAVE THE BIG SAD
Beginning was a bit rough, it seems you are getting better at writing. Less run-ons and camma errors. I like the charcter ideas, but at the beginning you were going everywhere. Now it seems more solid, I would like to read more.
This novel has a little of all and has a good starting point in my opinion and show how the dragon is going to change in to a good person or I may say a good dragon. To help does in need.
I started it, on another website. Didn't think I would like it the way it started but it turned super good and now I'm all the way addicted keep up the great work
