The Don’s Addiction - Reviews

I like the premise of the story, there haven't been any annoying stereotypical plot points and the characters are pretty good.The writing quality isn't the best right now, but when author gets an editor that will be great too I expect. Overall I enjoy the story a lot right now ?

A great read! A real underdog that is going to the top story. Lots of room for side character development if the main character slows down his progress in the future.

Whenever mc goes on his adventures, someone always watch his back/monitor him, and then he goes like 'I have bad premonition' but then he still act like idiot and then run for his life?

Well, so far so good of the reboot, I still like the original more, but that's probably because I enjoyed the 451 chapters of it.And by the way, there will be no betrayal by close one's in this reboot, right? Because if that's the case I'll just stop reading it right away. I stopped reading ATG because of that

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Good start. If this is Author's first story then yeah. The storytelling is good.  Anyway, after reading the available chapters, you'll get curious about their past, What the heck really happened... Want to know more about the MCs... keep it up!

" It's gone" said Gilo as he crawled out of where he was hiding.

Tiny Maggot God stepped up, and approached the house made from sweets.

"Just say it dont test my patient"

        "Well... It's hard to be mad at you, and it is good for you to be curious about things. Next time just be sure to follow directions please!" SnowFlake said in a happy voice, "Let's get back to camp now! When we get there I'll have RavenPool look at your paw."

      Jeremy looks at the figure in front of him. I should have expected as much… Something supernatural is always connected with reincarnation stories.

  Gao bingbing headed for the living room after cleaning up,her brother had already cooked but is no where to be found. she just thought he went out to buy some necessary things since he left a note telling her he would soon be back and she should eat first.