The dialogue in this section is absolutely vicious, and I love it. Every character speaks in a way that reveals exactly who they are, and some of these lines are going to stay with me for a long time.
Let me start with the messenger's lines because they're perfect. She doesn't waste a single word. 'Just a passerby. I am merely delivering some items' — cold, efficient, no warmth. And then the knockout punch: 'Knowing full well that it is retribution, she will not intervene to help. Kindness misplaced is equivalent to evil. Using medical skills on wicked people is no different from abetting tyranny.' That's not just dialogue, that's a manifesto. The formal, almost legalistic phrasing makes it hit even harder because it sounds like an official judgment.
Zhou Yuzhi's self-pitch is equally memorable, though for completely different reasons. 'I recommend myself to become Little Medical Immortal's disciple, promising to support and care for my master in the future, allowing her to enjoy her later years in peace.' The desperation is so thick you can taste it. He's trying so hard to sound noble and devoted that he sounds like a used car salesman.
Zhou Zhili's dialogue gets progressively more unhinged throughout the scene. He starts with polite murmuring — 'Of course, of course' — and ends up kicking doors and threatening entire noble houses. The progression feels completely natural. His line 'Gu Ruanci, don't think that just because you changed your name, you can rest easy forever' is pure rage, and it's terrifying because it shows how far he's willing to go.
The commoners' dialogue outside the gate is also worth noting. Their gossip — 'Go and take a look at Shouguo Gongfu!' — serves as a Greek chorus, commenting on the action and guiding the reader's emotional response. And Ye Chengyun's attempt at comfort, 'You look so beautiful today, but if you keep crying, you won't be pretty anymore,' is so profoundly tone-deaf that it's almost funny in the worst possible way.