The Divine Barista: A Fable of Divinity - Reviews

The Divine Barista: A Fable of Divinity
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This is my first reading a historical story. I almost thought that the story felt real like it was based on real experience and not a fiction. Great job, author!
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Written after chapter 108 :I found something great in this story. Something I didn’t know I missed, something I wasn’t looking for, but something I needed :The MC plays a MMORPG, with a GROUPu202f!!!(of soon-elite-to-be-players, of course but nonetheless)Yes, I know, incredible right ? but having so many stories in online-game-settings, ending with the OP-MC soloing everything by himself, becomes boring…And yet here you are, a story where the MC falls in a prison of sort, with fellow inmat…sorry, members following, having to build a team to get out of here, in a kind of good-feeling-village settings.And I have great hopes for what will follow.I hope that this village-feeling won’t disappear later on, and that the relationship within the group will be reinforced.And I also liked the MC calling his best friends to share his OP-discovery to play together.That’s how you are supposed to play such games…Oh, and we have real IRL city names for the IRL parts, which is way, way better than the usual « X city » and such.Notes :Writing Quality : 4,5/5=> here and there some missing words and some typos, the writing-style is good for meStability of Updates : 3/5=> my fan-thinking is taking the better of me here and I NEED the rest of the story right now y’know ? hence the harsh note. But I understand that quality takes time, so…Story Development : 5/5=> so far so good, a good balance between IRL and in-game storyCharacter Design : 5/5=> the MC story and personality is credible for now, the IRL shows some real nice things, I like it. The group is being built right now and I am eager to know who will be the next members :-)World Background : 5/5=> Real city names. Period.
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Hehe, another book with amazing synopsis that had led me to add to my collection. Story premise is amazing with strong MC character and steady growth. Good job author, and hope you continue to release more amazing chapters!
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Highly recommended ✓I'm honestly invested in this book already. The concept and the plotline feels me up with curiosity! The character seriously is about to experience a rollercoaster ride and I'm waiting to know more about the suspense that is to come. Looking forward to the next chapters. Fighting Author!?୧(^ 〰 ^)୨
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Angelo nodded, "I only need him, he will gladly give his life to show a superior his worth."
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What the fuck!!! She's deaf toned! She was screaming, I mean singing at the top of her lungs. She didn't give a damn, she was singing with feelings. She was so fucking shameless! She even called out my name in the middle of the song asking me to sing with her. I wanted to bury myself or wished that I would be struck by lightning. I didn't think I could bear to wait her finish the song. But miraculously I survived the shame. I was hoping that people would mock or judge her but instead they clapped their hands and gave her a standing ovation. She ran towards me and gave me a big hug and whispered in my ear.
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We kissed.
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"Right."Annabeth coughs, before changing the topic. "What are you reading, then?" She glances at the words on the page Amirah was on before her eyes widen in astonishment. "Is that Chinese?"
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Juki merasakan saat jantung berdetak sangat cepat, melihat dan mendengar parang bergetar disebelah mukanya.
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Damien: "Damien… Damien Dark, but just call me Damien" I said winking causing them to turn red.
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A Sole child/ survivor of that war grew up, he created a city in the name of the memory of his hero Soluna City was the name of that city...and he even Reopened the academy but instead gave it a name of G.E.A.R.S Academy
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harem but small like 1-3 that do other stuff and he sees time to time and 1-2 that are with him all the time like a maid and his second in command (if he makes a army) yes 18+ and i like the pacing so far i will leave it to other people for that

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