The Devourer's Legacy - Reviews

for the sake of God can you please upgrade to 4th grade or higher after every fight he is injured heavily and 5th orders always got killed by his using tricks his adopted brother Leo is 4th grade and  his pathetic excuses 3 goddess as fiance but he wants to not upgrade his cultivation because it will gain attention to him like building 5star Empire in year is  being very low profile he is adding one more goddess and still think he will keep low profile by staying at low cultivation level

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Please spoil me.. what chapter does the mc and fl find out about each other's identity like in summary?.................................................

Dear God I'm hooked I've read a lot of stories in my day and I can tell this is one fantastic story just started reading it today and couldn't stop in till I was done in for the long hall on this one please don't stop all my power stones coming your way

Honestly, this might be my worst story. But hey, that’s ok. You see your mistakes and then you learn and adapt from them. Simple as that. Hopefully I can see this as a good learning experience and write something even better for you guys in the future!

up till now is good lets wait for more updates

went from a good quality first chapter, to some trashy raw MTL by the second chapter

           As they walked out of the room they saw Lana laying on the bench looking at the ceiling while the alphas and seconds in commands to be glaring at her. He clapped his hands and said in a loud voice "Since Ms. doeson has a doctors excuse she will be staying on the side doing worksheets while the rest of you have fun in the dodge ball tournament. Good luck to all and may you all do your best."

Hayst huminga ako ng malalim at pumikit .

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"I'll go, I need to test something, thanks to Junior sister, our skills improve a lot and our foundation are solid compare to normal cultivators on our level" said a middle age man wearing the same clothes as the others. His V-shape moustache makes him looks like your every-girls dream gentleman. He was not overly handsome but his charm makes girls looked him twice.

"Ah! No need to bow! I'm at fault either way." I said, my hand on her shoulder. She looked up and to my surprise had violet colored eyes. Yes, when my Gracelyn gets mad that's what color her eyes turn but I've never seen someone with naturally purple eyes. I snapped out of my daze and introduced myself.