The Destined Mann-er - Reviews

This is after reading around 46 chapters.The story is nice and relaxing but after about ch 40, the name of the characters and companies change to weird ones, that three me off, so I dropped it. Example: Battling birds webcast platform became live broadcast of bird fights.

It's finally here! My first novel and also my favorite! An handsome MC in an history really interesting and with a world background completely insane.

Oh my god.. a book of Er Gen!!! this got to be good... :)wohoo >.

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This is a great book. Underrated because it may be a bit slower than many people's preference, with less violence, gore and ***, but the character development is unmatched.

I love interesting stories like this. The first few chapters were great, and it has alot of potential for something greater. chaRacters built like this always make for a much better experience .

nice ,.......,..........................

So, from the first 5 chapters I have read till now, I have felt the following opinions:1) I could immediately find and relate to the storyline2) The mc has gained some depth to his character already3) Some words need to be changed to make it better sounding. I lost my immersion into the story a few times when certain words couldn't bring out the intended effect4) The mental state of the mc has not been fixed. It's like he can read too much into a situation, trust others easily ( I'm not sure about this point, but something about the MC's behavior put me off a bit)5) but the story is quite immersive, it may not seem like a unique plot but it sure is interesting to read. I'm completely hooked up to the plot. ???

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to be honest I am doing this only for fps

"Devon Corp. isn't researching fossil technology?"

'Forget about that, if he doesn't work with us, we'll make him vomit any information that he has to.' There was a pause of about one minute before Don spoke again. 'Is there anyone living with her now like her brother did then?'