The Dead Bride - Reviews

The plot itself made on the edge of the seat. Wow that's amazing work I have ever read in my reading journey.

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hmm well this is fairly new story and there's not much juice in it but anyways heres what i think so far.1.The MC is original like he isnt the kind of guy thats too ideal or what most MC's usually are too matured for their age and all.2.And I personally like the meme references the author incorporates smoothly and subtly its hilarious and a new type of comedy i guessAnd please release ore chapters this story has great potential.P.S.- first review (SMUG FACE)

Writing Quality: The grammar is little confusing and the author made pretty much a lot of mistake while writingStability of updates: Don't know if the author is still writing this story he probably quit after 23 chapterStory development: it's fine not too bad but what I'm not satisfy in this story is the character habit in scratching their head's seriously? If the author decide to continue this story I suggest him don't make them scratch their head's too oftenCharacter design: not bad the only problem is the enemies their facing are a little limited in names for example a rat named Mouse mickey are you serious? XD and I saw change a girl name from Violet to Chrissy whats wrong with violet?World development: Pretty good using a VR technology to cultivate their strength for survival from the haze.

I've only read the first chapter and this is already hilarious. I would totally recommend this for this who like both action and comedy blended perfectly together.

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"Gau Duzal! My name is Azure Knight, I'm a tome maven that uses Sword Magic. I'm an A-Class Maven but I also participates on S-Class Missions. And also, it is already my fifth year here in Zeul Academy ." The leader introduced.

"So, you will have to complete twice as much work to catch up." He wagged his finger at me. "Don't tell me you are going to quit already?"

"I'm back to where it all started," A smirk rose on my face.

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Suzaku grimaced, knowing the General was right. He had however instinctively gone into the pose thanks to those early years under Toudou's mentoring. Suzaku released one hand and shifted his stance.

"Please what?" Rapmon responds, teeth nipping at Jungkook's ear as his mouth pulls into a knowing grin. "Hyung can't help you if you're not specific."