The Dark Phoenix - Reviews

It was a very good read. The writing style is superb. The character development is if not the best, it is one of the best. The best thing in this novel is the interaction between Sam and Levi. Their kind of romance is exactly just what I am looking for.

it gets worse with each chapter after some time

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Pretty good background and character design there I am very impressed with the quality and different aspects of the story. Some little things you have to take care and rest is fine I guess     

He went inside and there was a big space with a fire in the middle of it.

He just exited the cavern when the cloak skill deactivated.

Everyone looked at me and started laughing cause I was just a kid

She didn't know how it got there but it somehow did and now her cousin was making a scene inside the restaurant because of it.

She wanted to look at what the thing that was making these heavenly bodies to move around it but when she reached the center everything ended and she found herself in a white empty room. It was really a spacious room at least 1 km wide and long and a 200 meter in height...

A cloaked figure is now seen at the top of the empire state building jumped and slashed the dragon in half, and the dragon is destroyed and disappeared in light particles

And all that glitters is gold

„To describe all the evil things Joker did under the protection of the World Government… It would take several days to talk about all of them. I will show you only one crime he did, so you can understand how heartless this bastard is. At my side is a girl named Sugar. Don't be fooled by her appearance, she isn't a child. She ate a Devil Fruit that stopped her from growing older. And her devil fruit is the reason why this beautiful country named Dressrosa is full of sorrow. I will show you what she and her boss did"