The Cursed Orbit: fragment of Fate - Reviews

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This novel is so bad, though I don't know if it's the translation quality that makes it so or the original work itself was bad. Regardless, the story is all over the place and the flow is totally out of place. Regardless, I feel the story idea has potential. Just that I found ploughing through it very taxing.Don't recommend it to anyone. Try it at your own risk.

Give it a 3.6 for now liked it so far and how it develops but hard to Judge whit so few chapters  -.-  but i do hope it get picked   so i can hope fully read a nice  relaxing novel

I read this till  ch. 1202This one has an op protag with op friends, BUT his enemies has 100% plot armor.I can't believe some enemies are important to the author that they are suddenly saved or ignored because of some stupid reasons.I got frustated for the fact that, for the plot to continue, enemies will live every f****** time.

This book gets 5 stars from me because it managed to tell a whole story from beginning to end. It didnt stretch anything on for too long like most webnovles do. Its a complete book that i spent more money on than i would on a physical book. FML.

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I loved the movie I know I will love the book

30 chapters - DROPPEDI registered only to write this review, why! Cuz I'm mad for wasting time reading 30 chapters,The story is one of the best, good ideas, low, yet acceptable world-building; but the plot, logic, motive, character development, are all crap! Please forgive my offense but the author could have given us a beautiful fantastic work but he hurriedly pulls crap from God knows where and magically the 14 years boy becomes a badass in a few days, yet it could be acceptable to 10 years olds if he at least provided a justification, then a series of "matter of fact"s are thrown all over the place, add more "beauties" " save the father" and "run from the enemy" well, the young guy now is an expert after a few days_ and here you are, a very immature stupidly mustered plot with no motives, no details, no development.This is a light novel, I'm not expecting something by Dostyvasky, nevertheless; the author needs to be aware of a very minor little detail called "LOGIC" I refrained from mentioning details for spoilers, and I gladly wholeheartedly kiss goodbye for this lovely amazing work.DROPPED.

What a mess of a novel. Interesting idea, but starts to go south after the second arc. Lots of blatant racist choices in the plot, things happen on way too small of a time scale, and the author apparently got tied of writing and just stops at what was looking to be about 1/3 the way through his entire overarching story. What a waste of time.

Before Su Song could finish his words, he noticed that a thunder cloud was building up on top of Su Shi.