The Crownless Citadel - Reviews

I wish there were more chapters ......

I really like this one. here's hoping it gets picked

I can’t get past chapter 8 without trying to throw my phone at a wall. The translation is so far average, the way the sentences and words are constructed somewhat threw me off. The story development and character design is as cliche as it could get. The first few chapters are a copy of the most generic CN novels you could find. And I mean it. The author literally just change the name of the characters, the world, and the continents. If you’ve read enough CN novels you’ll know how the world background progress.

The synopsis makes me thought of a famous Japanese Novel's(or Chinese novel), where all mc reincarnated or stuck inside the game. Wherein they meet white lily's(typical harem), brain dead antagonists, fatty bro's, cute pet-kun anddddd etc??? But I'm hoping that I'm wrong and there's no cliché. For now I'll stockpile the chapter until it reaches to hundreds of chapters.

Lol this novel is busted. Mc becomes rediculously overpowered and an amazing fighter overnight………………………………….

That sounded terrible but it still could have been way worse. He didn't want to do it but of course, he would comply for her. Still, he really needed to get that marriage thing underway as fast as possible.

One of the muscular men step up and give me a knife, bowing his head down. Hey... hey... What with this (another) change of attitude? Suspicious. But even before I have the chance to run, my hand move on its own and reach out the knife. What am I doing!? Run, Kuro!!

Carlo/Peter:ok

The creator nodded. "Very unique. And because it is a less powerful technique, you will be born a noble. I hope you make the best of your new life.

Take that, usurper! You think you can rebel? Not on my watch! Even if countless of you slipped my influence, I would still control anything else on this book's universe, physics be damned!

Only shooting stars break the moldSomebody once told me the world is gonna roll me

If this is one of your tricks Azazel...