The Cross Dressing Hearthrob Always Wants to Kidnap me - Reviews

I was enjoying this story—a little. EE…It seems like IF one entered a sect to cultivate, that a cheat that made cultivation irrelevant would take away all the satisfaction—most of the satisfaction—out of attaining higher realms. Still. the tongue-in-cheek way the author handled the story made it halfway amusing. Then the act that ruins so many of these cultivation stories occurred. The protagonist ordered the little girl under his tutelage, to cripple someone's cultivation. I have no problem with murder—even torture, under the right motivation—But in a cultivation world, as described, absolutely NOTHING would justify crippling someone. There is an old proverb: "How do you hurt someone who has lost everything? Answer: Give him back something dear to him—BROKEN." IF one had been a cultivator, normal life would be hopelessly broken. Every second of every day would be like walking with shards of glass in one's shoes. You know, JUST ONCE I'd like to read about someone promptly committing Seppuku upon having their cultivation crippled. Ah well, I rant.

A story with a disguised karma system given to a fool of a MC. So one would expect a light comedy from this story.It is probably worth checking it out, but, for me, the MC doesn't manage to give me even the smallest of smiles much less earn my reading time.I have read too little a quantity of chapters to get a good feel of it. Who knows how it will develop?

i rarely give commets, but this novel is the trash of fkin trash. Idiotic MC, Selfish, and stupid very fast paced forward storyline. Even the author is lazy to make things better, dont fkin waste your time here.

Unoriginal, but also kinda boring.                                                                                                                     

It’s good and all…. But want this the book that never had it’s ending?Sad really. Bit on wattpad and fanfic.net this master peace of action adventure, learning and of lemons and limes was never to be completed.

This story would be good if it was properly edited. I understand why other reviews call it a MTL, i.g. it is barely readable. I understand how it may be unique, but consider My German Empire and Out of Space. These novels do this concept way better.

Congrats for securing a place in WPC 211- 212. Hope to see more chapters in the future, getting served like hot cross buns fresh out of the oven! ;)

Seems to have some influence from Japanese light novels. Good characters and an interesting plot so far, will be interesting to see what happens.

The story premise is really good, author needs to work on some simple grammatical errors but other than that, it’s a great read. Looking forward to the journey.

Técnicas Magicas:

"Proceeding to upgrade to the next level. Coo!"

"It's fine. Just go get dressed. The guests will be here soon," she said to me, "Lucas, you can use the guest room to change. Alice will show you where it is."