The Crimson Spark - Reviews

Honest review. I actually like the beginning but after that MC becomes puss_y , he doesn't want to change past but he did , he doesn't want to gather too much attention but he did by becoming no. 1 , and he is such a coward that he can fight those bully with background but when he sees player in his class he becomes scared like really they don't even know you avatar and they won't know until you tell them .He is So what's the point of becoming scared , coward

Honestly, I liked it. Concept was nice, and not common. The MC is, to put it in a bad way, weird, to put it in a good way, he's just eccentric. For me, his personality is a breath of fresh air. Story is pretty nice, also it has a good twist for the vr genre. I can let that weak/inconsistent gaming system slide. I'd say this is pretty unique.  My only qualm is about the grammar mistakes. Like using the wrong words but similar words, or confusing sentence construction sometimes. But they are all readable, if anything, it must be because of writing fatigue or because there is no editor.

I don't know what to say but the story is good. There are many novels that are good in the beginning but get worse as events progress and this novel to pass the time and I did not spare an effort to read it and here I have finished it

Hmm, I will add it to my library, and check it out when more chapters.                                                                                    

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What a little gem I found. why is this story not on the highest rankings is beyond me. the writing and the flow are excellent, even if the story is moving a little too slow (not a criticism, I'm simply greedy for more haha). Keep it up, love your work.

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Nayuta : zac thanks for saving me earlier

"Heh,when the Country is destroyed,don't blame me!"With that,I took my last step backwards,falling into the abyss.*Bang *Bang!I heard gunshots.Too bad they were too late,what did they even expect?

"Shh Shh, it's okay," Kuroka rocked gently back and forth, brushing a hand over Koneko's head.

Mesa shook his head " Your need is food and water is keep death away, in away you are in control of your death. When you are killing, you don't have emotions, so you are free of emotions. With strength you are free from oppression. So basically, true freedom is when you command death "

A breaking sound issued. The tip of the sword broke off and flown away into the sky. Emily got grown back and rammed into a tree that immediately broke. But Fakanra wasn't happy about the outcome. Instead, it was gobsmacked as he looked at a large tusk in the elf's hands, and a very familiar chopped off arm not far from it.