THE CODEX : GAMES OF NEXUS - Reviews

I rate my novel low because I know for myself I need a lot of improvements regarding the structure of the sentences. But like that being said I want you guys to support it thanks a lot!

Long time ago,there was a gray  magic castle in the monster town.One day,the old brother Monkey and the   young brother mankey were  going to the gray  magic castle ,they wanted to know what was in the castle.At morning,they met at star park and they had a lot of things to take.They had a big baseball bat to take,because if some bad people fight them they can use that to hit them.They had a camera to take some pictures for the castle.They had a torch to see in the dark and they bring some water and food.After twenty minutes,they were in front of the castle.They wanted to go to the castle at night so nobody will find them.At ten o’clock,they went to the castle,but they saw there were a lot of robbers in the castle,so they had to wait and wait.

It's an excellent novel and I am hoping that author picks it back up ( considering it isn't dropped).I was really bored for a while before I stumbled on this novel. It has its own unique perspective character and world design. It's worth the time....only downside is that I have no clue if it will be continued or we will be left hanging here o-o)/ author San comon pick it up.

Kinda disappointing.  Mc is a beta and underwhelming,  story is plain confusing.  Feel no enjoyment from this . Shame                     

After reading to about 170 chapter i just can't keep going.The dialogue and thoughts shouldn't both be in " " , Every-time i read something in " " i assume they are speaking only to see -thought XX. Sometimes it seems like they are thinking, but it turns out he is speaking. It's like a goddamn guessing game every-time you see " " you can't be sure if they are speaking or thinking, so you have to read the whole line, read after it to know if those are thoughts or words and ONLY then you can insert it into the story. So many times i get it wrong. Really the worst thing about this novel is that, at this point im just tired of the guessing game.

I really don't understand , There's no woman? no city? So where is the baby come from? can man get pregnant? are they even human? where are they??u200d??u200d?

where are you author? ??? please comeback

"Thank you again for hosting us during our Activity Request from the Adventurer's Association Eminos, as well as giving us the Magic Manual for Wind Magic."

To end the date, the couple strolled down the streets where Akihito was once again tempted by street food. Giving in to his husband's desires, Asami got them fried ice cream rolls and Akihito moaned with delight at the sweet treat.

"No."

Snaps my finger as Rias felt a very strong haze effecting her mentally

You could call me an average guy of about 22 years of age, about 5'11 with black hair and brown eyes. A little bit of acne and a slim body. I had a bit dull complexion with a habit of running my hands through my hair. Still a virgin with no girlfriend and a shy personality when in comes to talking to new people.