I can't get enough of the story. the more I read the more interesting it becomes. the suspense is killing me. Why would it end like that. will he ever find his wife. What an ending
I've read this and boy if your into VR novels this one is for you. It's nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice
this was not executed well. The story has way too many pov's. it's horrendous it starts to put me to sleep and can't focus. I made it to ch 16 and couldn't stand the grammer anymore.
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