So sad she will lose her baby because of the attack . I wonder if it was Dija . Need to not be in suspense more chapters then 1 or 2 … Well written some Grammatical mistakes , It can hold a reader to continue.
A decent story.There may be some problems but it is enjoyable.Its a harem story and yes author is trying to give the girls personalities. Story depth is ok not too shallow.Its not a masterpiece but its enjoyable to read.
eh not bad ig idrk it has 21 chapters instead of 20 does this mean it was already chosen? one of the better ones of the lot as well pretty good for a webnovel trial read
"That's not what worries me," Ichigo said as he narrowed his eyes. "She just said that those two who I shot are perfectly fine," he said causing Kisuke and Renji to look at Ichigo with wide eyes.