The Chronicles of the Ancient Star - Reviews

A wonderful novel on par with Cuttlefish's other works. However this wonderful novel is marred by the translation. The novel was dropped by webnovel and the translation is incomplete. The translation quality was also subpar along the way. Truly a shame how webnovel didn't give this novel the respect it deserves. His other novel, Martial Arts Master, also suffered from terrible TL quality but at least was fully translated.

The idea behind this story is good and I'm of the opinion that if the author keeps with the story to completion then they will have a fantastic first draft.That said the author tells the readers what's happening rather showing. This doesn't allow the reader to deeply immerse themselves in the story. I think this also contributes to the pacing problems of the story.Over all if you don't mind that this is a fledgling author then I believe this to be a promising story and hope the author will continue writing it.

The Best Cultivation Novel Out there, except for the stupid action at the beginning of the novel which is negligible. Just hope that he doesn't chase MIL F around, just go for pure maiden

The synopsis is very interesting. It has good potential. And magic world novels are always interesting!....................................

Another great novel more update for this one i'll be updating myself with these. I'm not used to reading harem novel but with the system plus kingdom building then this one is for me and you.. Please support the author to continue writing these novel. Thanks Again.

keep up the good work, the book is amazing

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'By that logic, my stats are a reflection of that perception.'

This is not some high tech sci-fi story, nor is it an action packed romance. This "novel" is about my alter ego Dick Sieves and his daily adventures at Health Clinic Sander Reed.

Now the bully and his older half brother was another thing, heaven gifted them with exceptional beauty. They, especially the 3rd Prince would definitely grow to be even more beautiful then his birth mother. As Wei Wei she could not help but feel pity for the boy who was being bullied but as the Emperor, she could not care less. This warp in the child's personality was due to the environment they had to grow up in. The Palace is filled with faction, if either he or the Empress do anything, only more trouble would form.

SpicyDaoist is very spicy.            

Got me interested. Has potential. Keep it up. ??