The Chase - Reviews

I do like this one, the idea where he can go between worlds is really good, but I do wish they clean up the chapters a bit. Please use spaces I beg of you!

The best RI fanfiction I have read so far  Its quality is really close to that of original.  The author is a really big fan of RI and fanfiction includes every minute details about this world. Author also definitely knows that once we read RI, our expectations will be high as f.He really gave his all to this fanfiction.The only bad thing is that we don’t have enough chapters.Thank you very much for your hardwork.

It's an interesting story concept and for now I find that the plot and the presentation of the characters is well written. Now if there was a little more chapter release it would be even better but good if future chapters continue like that i would not complain too much. I really like this story, can not wait to read more, good job author.

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" That's not fair!" I pouted.

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Hearing this, Jing Ming Yue lowered her head and thought it over seriously. Despite the fact that Sasuke and Tieta had forced her out of the top 3 places, she didn't show a trace of dissatisfaction in her expression. From this alone, it could be seen that Jing Ming Yue was not a narrow-minded person.

"It's okay. I'm past that now."

Just basing my review from your novel I Can  Copy Curses so I assume this will be great also. Please continue that novel plss, I really love the story of Orion. And this too. So dont drop both.

Sigh! I can not wait for the faceslapping to start. Dear author ! Whens the Next update?! Don’t keep tour readers in suspense here please.

Off to a great start! The story draws me in compelling me to read more. Easy to relate to some of the characters. Keep going! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D