The Celestials Prison - Project Archangel - Reviews

Wow! I'm still awed after reading this dynamic and rare creative story This is more than I've ever seen or read ever in my entire lifeThis Author deserves more than a Nobel Prize In Literature cos this is Epic and Genuine

(1+3+1+3+2)/5=2The author's trying to put a novel together and mixing troupes from this and other genres. that's alright.and the author tries to be a chill dude who keeps in touch with his work and new comers.so being honestly critical starts to feel a little hard. The editing honestly hurts. for any defenders of this English; alright, we grew up with a completely different version of English. This doesn't match my experience with either American, British, Australian English or any other.I'm slightly confused as the few replies to my comments from the author led to me believing that he/she actually doesn't have a problem with English.side note if anyone is interested in a bit of reality. a woman who deals with stress for any amount of time wilts. The same goes for men. in other words they lose their aesthetic and raw sexual appeal. For a story and a fantasy's sake, i can see and mostly agree that it doesn't matter. I have however seen this so much that I'm now tired of it.stay healthy folks.

Unfortunately, author forgot that amnesia doesn't make someone stupid. I could have been a good novel, but I can't stand reading the story of someone just being dumb.

Abrupt to the point of parody. Seems pretty typical.

Izan gazed into Voldemort's eyes before a grin appeared on Izan's face. "You are losing control, aren't you?" Izan was able to perceive that the Magical Force and the Dark Eerie Presence of Vaal Van Denio was fighting each other inside of Voldemort's body, fighting for supremacy.  

The pain was unbearable froth now exited his gargling mouth with desperation he crawled towards the book as he reached the bound tome he grabbed it and tossed it into the still hot fire as he did the pain still racked his brain but he watched as it caught fire and slowly turned to ash but as it did his eyes rolled back and all before him returned to black.

Equipamentos:

Night advancing at high speed, his punch directly hit the pig's head, the wild boar was shocked and did not have time to dodge being hit by a blow that fell to the ground and died.

Mrs kapoor: do whatever you want but I don't want to go the jail

"AHH~~! Del, you can't, you can't… do both… at the same tiiime~~ I CAN'T FEEL~ THIS GOOOOD~~~ Del~~~"

You can no longer use "I'm solo" as a wall

He felt a bit annoyed since this was the first time he lost health since he got into this world. He only lost health since he was a bit cocky at killing a lot of monsters, which caused him to get injured on his left arm, which caused him to curse at his own stupidity.