The Celestial Road to Immortality - Reviews

44 chapters 4/29/24

I was a great fan of the other one and want to give this one a try. However, I want to ask the author if you need to read this one before your upcoming side story, The Secret Wars?

Great characters, storytelling, world building and so far i don't think I've seen a single grammar error or typo, which is very appreciated nowadays. Update stability hasn't been the best, but that's because author's been busy with other things.Amazing book

Great story , It is so captivating and catchy ... I could say the author is really has a great imagination to make this great story ... here's a 5 star for you ?

Oh, got another video game novel in the works to read.Get yourself ready for another amazing story filled with action strength and the potential to reach the top.

I actually don't know why Hollywood directors' story writers are so confident that their MCs will be trusted to directly direct films with big expenses.Mc is a beginner, 18 years old, his first foray into the world of film and he asked to become a director.no matter how good the story script the mc has, people in the film world will not believe it so easily.It's good that the manuscript wasn't just taken, we all know how copyright works.

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The grammar does need a little bit of editing. But that's just a technical part of being a writer. The story matters more. For a webnovel, the idea is different and somewhat unique. Video game lovers would definitely have a blast, reading this as they embark on a fantasy adventure with the characters. It's 8 chapters in so I cannot comment on the story development yet. Please do update more :)

Great book for now, the updates are unstable but the content is amazing.............................................................

nice bookI strongly recommend itI hope Mari and Elvis get what they deserve

            she start to clean the wound with seriousness , seeing her serious face made the man heart beat fast and blood boil , as she was wearing her party cloths so when she bend  her neck and little bit of  her breast show  up and seeing  it made his blood goes to a certain place .

'But well... This [Mind Gaze] must be why I was able to perceive more clearly Bork's previous outburst back when I was asking to be let out.'