The Calamity of Eryndor - Reviews

From the very beginning nicely written story with an 'interesting' sense of humor! Have no doubt you know how to write!The plot is intriguing. The main character is well designed, and his new friend/pet is also fascinated, creature. Well done!Good luck with the contest!

New novel. I had no motivation to write the next chapter of oaa so i will use this novel as a something to help my writers block.This novel will be more slower paced, at least in the beginning, and will have more slice of life. This novel follows Damian, who returns to the past with a power. Hypnosis. With this power he will do all that he can to reach his goals.

A l'air grave prometteur !!..................................................................................................................................................

Hi author The novel you write is extremely nice. The chaps are also well written. I hope he makes more of them and continues his author job. May the stars align for him.

10/10 story, love the main character, love the not overpowered system', love everything, please keep updating

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" Soap switch to sniper rifle". Price said." Gaz cover left flank."

The avatar nodded, calming his anger. He had just offered the man a chance he could only dream of, but the mortal had set his terms as if someone owed him.

The general scoffed, "you think I'm a shit-bag? I have to say, Cem, I thought four years of studying history in college would help you understand that hostages should never insult their captors." The general raised his hand, readying the whip to strike Cem down again. Cem held up his own hand and the general laughed, "do you think your hand can stop my whip?"

Never!             Never!   Never!

Definitely a great novel as expected to the author. Just trust me and read this novel.

I love this Book so much. Please Never stop writing this story ?