The Brothers of Nexus - Reviews

If you want literally anything outside of faceslapping, don‘t read this. I want the time I wasted on reading 20 chapters of this abomination of literacy back.

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I have not read much yet so take this at face Value. I enjoy the few characters and their personalities that we have been introduced to so far. I also enjoy the plot, although it is not very unique i like where it is going. the only problem i have is that the writing can sound kind of weird like some things been written in present tense when it should have been written in past tense, but it does not bother me much. over all i recommend it ?

I really like this story, keep up the good work author, it means the world to me. try reading the story from a to z, you might me able to spot mistakes more easily ?

He went to the kitchen fridge and grabbed some eggs and veggies. He pulled out four loaves of bread and place them inside the toaster. He prepared the frying pan and added a little bit oil. Then he added the egg and top it with salt and tomatoes.

After great thinking and deliberation, Akash's father proposed to Dev, "There is one solution to this problem. If you marry Bhumi, then we can have both Bhumi and the baby. Will you do that? I won't call it a sacrifice because sacrifices don't last long. If you are prepared, then I will talk to Bhumi's father. Take your time. I have already asked you to give up your career in the army, which I know was very dear to your heart, now I can't keep forcing my own decisions onto you." There were tears in his eyes as he said this to his son. No one had imagined being in this position.

"I know the abilities of Sona, of her [Queen] the vice-president, and of several others of her servants. Though some of their abilities haven't been confirmed yet." Rias said, unsure

It wasn't in Fan Ling's nature to be afraid, but he was used to being at the top of his game. He was yet to be knocked to the bottom ever since he got a hang of the system; HIS system.

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An shameless 5 star from the books author.