The Brotherhood Of The Damned. - Reviews

Too many name changes and change of viewpoints. Grammar is lacking. Multiple abandoned storylines that seem to be forgotten once set up. Needs serious editing

........................................

This is dreadfully dull novel. It's so generic that there is nothing that distinguishes this novel from anything I've read before, I'll likely forget it ever existed in a few days. I have no issue with genericness and mediocrity, I read as many generic mediocre novels as the next guy. However, there is such a thing as extreme genericness and mediocrity which is exactly what this novel suffers from, it stops just being mediocre and turns into whatever this insufferable abomination is. This has no defining features, it's just a bunch of tropes slapped together. Paralysed sister, generic dystopian world with humans at the risk of extinction, miserable strength based hierarchy, dead parents, talent cheat, hiding abilities, knowing some pretty girl from a big family, fall from grace and the list just goes on really, I can't be bothered to list everything out.There're no ideas of any value or interest here. Decent translation and the execution isn't the worst thing I've read but this is just worthless honestly. 0/5.

So just pick this book. A great premise. Really want to know how the MC gets through his early predicament! So far the pace is good but a little frust at times!rating

I'm gonna be shameless and leave a review until I get a rating and don't need this anymore, anyways, the story is as described in the synopsis, also, you might be confused as to why things are unknown even after the prologue, it is intentional M. M is out

The main character is a sîm p; the author tries to hide it under a veil of edginess though. FL cheats on him and he forgives her and aids her although she is legit a th0 t. The characters are all bland and repetitive, overall this is a overrated novel. Very unsatisfying to read; if you can't write romance don't! It ain't hard. Like seriously I feel like this novel gave me brain damage. Yes, it's that bad. This novel had the potential to be good but was ruined by a probably (?) hor ñý as§ author. World background is overall decent (very cliche though). Translation is quite good.

honestly the story is good and the writer is quiet talented too , but there were a some plot holes such as when the mc left to adventure he was undercover and only the guild master recognised him , and then left to slay the dragon , meanwhile Lancelot found his aura at the crime scene ( idk man black tech , helps you know the owner of the aura , how it works ? not explained ) and somehow and with no further lead he kind of went where the mc is ,how he knew his location ? not explained , saw him fighting the dragon , used a spell (he's a swordman who can use mana and divinity ,which is unbalanced) that teleports the enemy against his will from miles away , how it works ? not explained then he made a barrier that made him invincible , how it works ? not explained if you read the above you'll get my first point : only a little is explained.my second point is how inconsistent the story is , for example  lancelot crossed the distance between 2 nations in a day and a half max , while in the 'castle attack' arc the duchess didn't call the Duke to come because it'll take a week ? ,i mean the distance was 20 kilometers and he was far more powerful than Lancelot so shouldn't he cross it in an 2 hours max ?

Zara wondered if she, too, could practice her teacher's specially created Jade-Dragon Body technique eventually.

"Damn it!" Cahir swore, as the words escaped his mouth the ship moaned and began to drop.

Aaarrggg!!kainis!dis oras na ng gabi mag patulog ka namang aso ka..tinakpan ko ng unan ang tainga ko.

"Well, you looked like you were having such a nice sleep and I didn't want to-"

Village chief / village-his daughter!