THE BROKEN RIFT - Reviews

While I sadly skippety skippety skipped all the steamy stuff, the non-steamy parts showcased that the author knows what they are doing. Excellent style. I would legit say that the horrifyingly striking beginning is one of the best I have read in a while. There is nothing I would change about the language, even though the genre is not my thing. I would say that the pacing and the absolute gut punch of a beginning should be enough to convince any reader.

This is just what I'm looking for......  Though I kinda hoped they'll be more description when "Kiba goes on a Mission". Apart from that their's also the fact that he's cruel to anyone who shows killing intend to him, regardless whether it's a man or woman, dude shows no mercy..... Killing a chick you just banged with no remorse.........  That leaves a really bad taste...... But with all that aside, it's worth reading ?.  I HIGHLY RECOMMEND IT!!

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After many fruitless searches for well-written, comedic, intense, thought-provoking ... novels on this website (which is quite the demand I know I know) I have come across this gem. It's wonderful. it has everything I could want and more. I won't go into the details, so please check it out for yourself!

Updates are daily. The story quality, both writing and development is awesome. The characters all have their own backgrounds and personalities(even the antagonists!) The mc is a good guy that still cares for his players, even though his environment could change him. The denizens (citizens) of the Abyss aren't all evil, and they act just like any chuunibyou worker in a game store. so its all good

Full story is on MTL. 190 chapters. It’s a good story, but many parts are just a bit too rushed. And like most light novels I’ve read, the ending is incredibly rushed.

Extremely bad book.Read 19 chapters and its a sure drop book do not choose it.I wasted time on it, and i rarely say so.Maybe it's better after 30-40 or whatever chapter but you really can eat cactus, if you able to read until then.

trash                         trash                        trash                                trash                            ...............................................................................................................................................................

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overall, this story is an intriguing one, the writing is top notch although, still needs a bit of improvement, still it's a wonderful book . Good job author!?