The Blessed Curse - Reviews

When My Disciples Are Superb and I Lie Flat, When My Sect Is Destroyed and I Am InvincibleStockpiling Ten Thousand Tons of Pork During the ApocalypseCultivator From the FutureWhen My Disciples Are Superb and I Lie Flat, When My Sect Is Destroyed and I Am InvincibleStockpiling Ten Thousand Tons of Pork During the ApocalypseWhen My Disciples Are Superb and I Lie Flat, When My Sect Is Destroyed and I Am InvincibleCultivator From the FutureWhen My Disciples Are Superb and I Lie Flat, When My Sect Is Destroyed and I Am InvincibleStockpiling Ten Thousand Tons of Pork During the ApocalypseWhen My Disciples Are Superb and I Lie Flat, When My Sect Is Destroyed and I Am InvincibleCultivator From the FutureWhen My Disciples Are Superb and I Lie Flat, When My Sect Is Destroyed and I Am Invincible

I've been a fan of the author for a while and I love how his story telling and writing style went up from good to great in less than a year. im really looking forward to where this novel goes and enjoying the graphic fights along the way.

Translation: 5Excellent, and not just because of this site. Will be looking at other works by this translator.Updates: 5Hey, 100 uploads within hours of each other? Lets pile the pressure and see whether this rate will be maintained. If not...we can always do another review...this one with less stars...[yeah, I'm talking to your mr Translator]Story Dev'p: 3Story officially - for me that is - picks up right around chapter 41. The rest is the usual "trash young master with stupendous comprehension but incapable of cultivating due to some unknown reason but right about the time some internal conflict with the clan arises his issue is resolved etc etc". Then of course, there is the ubiquitous 'clan extermination to give MC motivation' and escape into the wilds etc etcAs of the 41st chapter, I like the twist. Usually you have the MC's clan wiped out before he engages in retaliation. Here, he has no direct relationship with the clan he was ordered to destroy save for the obvious link they [destroyed clan] had with his own enemies. Most authors like justifying the MCs actions [save for that psychotic in Reverend Insanity] so it was refreshing to see him as the aggressor in this instanceXcter design: 4Talks to himself sometimes [I think...skimmed thru most of the first forty chapters]. He has something of a personality though; didn't get foolishly angry at someone's challenge, bows his head, isn't immediately compelled to overcome every other genius...All in all, not too badWorld Background: 4Initially gave it a 4 but dropped it back down to 3 then raised it to 4 once again.Reason?Got confused with cultivation levels. No real description of people or the world [though this could be because I skimmed thru the opening chapters but that is the author's fault]It still gets a 4 because of the explanation for comprehension levels. I truly despise meatheads and this novel is keeping far from that bad business of some cultivator only piling up mass so that they can drive their spear with greater force [looking at you Dong Bo Xue Ying and Ling Ming and Ancient Strengthening and the rest of you sorry lot]

Like the rest, or most of them anyway. My only problem with this is the fact that the use of (He, she, him and her) are "out of whack" so to speak. But that's it, the rest I can overlook... A good work though.??

The novel was really good at first until you get farther down the chapter where their are useless girls by his side where he becomes a beta

Erza's head snapped around. "What?"

"She is privy to some sensitive information that we need. She will be coming with us." Umbridge said in her usual high pitch voice. It sounded more like a demand.

I agree

And we could all use a little change

Agility: 72

The group waited a bit as there was some tension between the elders in the room and the Konoha shinobi.  They waited while Sakura was healing Kankuro. Soon she came out as she had successfully healed Kankuro.  She explained that by using her delicate illness extraction jutsu she mastered while training  with Tsunade to extract most of the poison.  She then used the medical herbs in Suna to create three antidotes.  They now needed to figure out where the Akatsuki had gone and help Suna track them down and help return the Kazekage.

Overall, good novel. The good: - Story progression is okay                  -MC's past life actually plays a role in the story, unlike some other novels                  -It's actually not a blatant copy of TAPOV                                  -Grammar is okay, I guess. There's still some mistakes here and there but it's readable                   -VANESSA MY BELOVED  The bad:    -Characters that are not Alan himself are... a bit lacking. We know next to nothing about them other than their base personalities and backstories (Okay maybe Sabrina is a good character but I haven't seen her in a chapter for so long)                   -MC's character development ended a bit too abruptly (Which I can't really complain since I did the same thing in my novel)                  -Okay I can't think of anything to say so let's end it here                     -