The Black Moon Saga - Reviews

yoo why is this here when it's already translated to 1900+ chapters in other website? ¯_ಠ_ಠ_/¯......................

very nice ...................                                       .......   ...........................................................................

Raw name: 通天仙路Status: 1360 Chapters (Completed)........................................................................................................

I almost died trying to read through waves of useless descriptions and confusing overly elborate great  walls of text. As some people commented, even gods will have trouble reading through this.

I found myself liking the MC much more starting from C3. The characterization feels humorous with an underlying serious tone. I have a personal preference for such atmospheres and the writing accentuates that chapter.Moving on to technical issues, I feel that the novel will improve with less usage of adverbs.I notice that you have a heavy inclination of using the word 'had' and using the phrase 'a small'. Perhaps some variation would help here?All the best!

Shameless                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    

my only disappointment with this novel is the fact that its released so slowly. Borderline torture and agony cuz the novel is glorious. amazing world, lore, character design...i just wish this book gains more recognition cuz its seriously one of the best ones here....and I'm very stingy with where I spend my coins.

Boring and unrealistic                                                                                                                        

There are only few chapters but so many things already happened. I can see the hint of world building, the development is also good. Language is also fairly good.There were some problems, but over all decent novel. MC has no goal right now, but I saw Author's comment that he will give him goal through journey, so let's see. I don't like MCs without any proper goal.

at that moment invisible dragon…

A group of adventurers was filled with horror as witnessed a dark shadow flashing above the tree branches.

"We're really grateful that you offered to let us stay, Lara," he starts. "But I'm afraid we can't."