The Billionaire's Moonlight Muse - Reviews

The Billionaire's Moonlight Muse
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He unkillable soul or body that broken >_> I read it in raw
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BRING IT BRING IT BACK! BRING IT BRING IT BACK! BRING IT BRING IT BACK! BRING IT BACK! BRING IT BACK! BRING IT BACK! BRING IT BACK! BRING IT BACK! BRING IT BACK! BRING IT BACK! BACK! BACK! BACK!
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So the story is pretty good so far while I’m at chapter 55. The pacing is nice, the skills seem interesting, and it looks like there is a lot of potential for world building. That being said, it seems to be heading in a direction that makes me feel like I might drop it soon sadly. I’ll list the pros and cons belowPros:-Good pacing-Cool abilities-OP protagonist, if you’re into that-Only about 120~ chapters are in VR, then it goes to real-world (from what I have seen)-Interesting power system of gods and blessingsCons: -Grammar is fine most of the time, weird at other times, and occasionally requires you to read something a few times to understand -A few plot holes-Some illogical power scaling- the Romance (this is making me think about dropping) This will be more detailed as it’s my biggest issue so far. So far, the female lead serve to do 3 things: blush when the MC says something, stutter when interacting with the MC, and receive things from the MC…im not exaggerating. Her unique class, her equipment, her summons, her spells, all from the MC. She is useless 99+% of the time and it’s to the point where the main female side character, who hasn’t gotten as much screen time, is more persuasive as a love interest (no harem confirmed so all hope is lost ?). To top it off, the MC changes his whole personality when he is with her. About 18 of the 55 chapters I’ve read so far has been centered around them together so there is that… I’ll try some more chapters but it’s not looking good. The worst part is, I feel this behavoiur will get worse when it switches from VR to real life.TLDR: Pretty decent so far, not too many errors but they are apparent, the romance is ruining the story and unless something changes, I’ll probably drop.
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Can't wait for it,form the synopsis it is quite interesting ...
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Blue tried to block but her sword was pierced through. Blue's eyes widened.
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But she shook her head after believing that this can't be a fraud and also, knowing there was something wrong. She needed answers. She wanted it!
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(victor): okk.
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And Minerva started pummeling me I the head with her bag. Fortunately for me, this was the last week of the school year, which means there was nothing that heavy inside her bag, so it didn't hurt as much as usual.
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"Let's have Mexican, Olay!" I said excitedly. She smiled and nodded. I helped her with work and got finished early that evening. I went back to my apartment and put on a chocolate coloured dress. I was walking down the road to meet Charlotte in the restaurant. A few more minutes of walk and I'll be there. I walked past an alley and saw a shadow. I went in there to see when everything went black.
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Wow, i really love it and also the writing style, I'm in chapter 5 and can't wait to see what unfolds when Eleanor meets the Alpha.
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This book is awesome and the grammar etc is impeccable. I while heartedly recommended to anyone who enjoys a good system type novel. Serious props to the author. Take my stones. :)
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I like Norse myth and I like the direction the author is taking the Norse world...

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