I need to talk about how this section moves because honestly the author is a menace. We open with Xu Qin completely falling apart—her aunt's screaming match, the photo getting hurled, the slap that shocks even the aunt herself. It's heavy, it's slow, it's the kind of scene where you just sit with it. And then—bam—we cut to Meng Yancheng alone in a bar at midnight, three empty whiskey glasses, injured knuckles. The transition is so sharp it almost hurts.
And then Fan Shengmei's phone buzzes at 11 PM with a 'fancy' number ending in 6668. I literally snorted. The way the author builds that moment—Qiu Yingying teasing about the 'client daddy,' Fan Shengmei's mask slipping onto her nightgown, the three seconds she stands frozen in front of her closet at midnight deciding whether to go—it's perfect tension building. She doesn't even know he's in danger and she's already bouncing on her sofa like a teenager.
Then we're in the bar and the pacing goes from slow-burn melancholy to full-on thriller in about two paragraphs. Ye Zi enters, the drug kicks in, Meng Yancheng wakes up, the blackmail message gets sent, Fan Shengmei arrives, the ice water happens. It's breathless. And the chapter ending—'When her footsteps faded, Meng Yancheng slowly lowered his hand'—I need the next chapter immediately. What was he covering his eyes for? What was he hiding?
Also the chapter titles are doing so much work here. 'Ye Zi's Trap' followed by 'With a Lifetime Meal Ticket, Who Still Needs Stocks?'—the second title is such a funny commentary on Fan Shengmei accidentally buying stocks right before saving his ass. The author is clearly having fun with this.