The billionaire’s haunted house - Reviews

The billionaire’s haunted house
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Alright, the score is pretty low, but  it's reasonable... I think. anyway.Translation quality is OK, but could be better. the phrasing is quite bad to be honest. If the author wrote it like it's translated, then this must be their debut work, because it feels really... I really don't know how to say it, without ****** people interpret what I've said in a wrongly. but, the ******st analogy? emmm.... Childish, but planned. or is very innocent in a way, but at least the story it self seems to have been planned ahead properly.The MC himself, is quite childish also, or even quite innocent. it's like a man was put in the body of a child, and the childishness seeped in, and erased the *****, but left the memories of the future. Also, things seem to go rather well for this MC, but it's strange. I honestly have no interpretation of why I think this series has a strange flow, but I have this weird feeling as I read it. not a bad feeling mind you.World background... Again, I must say, 'honestly', the world isn't as of yet too far thought out, but the actual 'world' around the character seems to be developing, like, housing market, stocks and so on... oh, and computer development. I wish this MC could think of smart things to do with the internet, it really wouldn't be to hard to make a website worth money around that time, it would just take a bit of development, and financial stability. but, as long as he invented YouTube, he'd be fine. I think it isn't banned in China, so it should be fine...And my final conclusion to my thoughts about this story...Read it if you wanna, It's not the best, but it has some interest elements to it. So if your here for lighthearted rebirth or should we say, revert to an alternate time line, 18 years before, where the MC isn't a genius, but get's a better body and memory right off the bat as a consolation prize, but doesn't know how to truly capitalize on his future knowledge, however, does in fact know how to make Some use of the new body. My last thing to say is: The first chapter is BS, it almost makes no sense except TRYING to explain to you, the MC was all of a sudden, reborn for no apparent reason. Apparently a different, and even better body/memory.However, it doesn't really explain, If he was suddenly reborn, or if he was reborn for quite some time, and this is likely the translator/editors fault for confusing me. and I must point out, that the Author really wanted to get the character out of high-school, but still give the character SOME very minor Introduction and slightly developing the world background.and to finish off what I'm saying... the Story is very fkn high paced, has a very small character development phase, but as I said at the start, I'm pretty sure this is the authors debut piece, or best work at the time of release... if not, then I truly feel sorry for this author, being able to write, but is inadequate in their understanding of the human psyche, emotions, rational and thus creating an inferior product, that is unworthy of their actually writing talents."
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i really want to give this novel 4 star but i cant from chapter 40-50 Translation Quality drops and i don't even understand what going on anymore >.>, so i hope they fix it soon.
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Not my cup of tea, to say the least...I found The Novel's Extra quite addicting by the time I stumbled across it. Although addicting I dont think it should win any awards or anything or the story should be immortalized, it had its fair share of misha** and errors but its still good nontheless for me and many others. The concept of an author being placed in his own novel mostly as a side character was such an amazing idea to me that I went hunting for other kinds of novels with such concept. Albeit some were good I'd say a lot were mediocre or just plain bad. I mean no offense saying this, but this doesnt really scratch that 'amazing' novel itch ive been wanting to scratch since finishing TNE. Its not good but its not bad....just meh, this novel is just another time killer for me during quarantine. But hey I decided to drop this pretty early in the story. I may regret it or I may not, who knows?Thank you for your effort author but it isnt for me. Hopefully many others will see this novel and decide to stick around longer than I had. Best wishes for everyone! :D
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I am leaving five stars cause I like the ancients world and hope that this can be just as good anyways I hope they can live up to the high expectations i have of it
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A funny novel but low updates At least 7 ch week should be schedule also till now i only found one fault ie age of cultivators Its too much ????????????????????????????????????????????????????
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A fresh breath all the cliche isekais out there..the mc is also good.Also I'm here because of the author..Keep churning out the chapters author.
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Author here :>I just finished publishing the first 5 chapters. This is my first time writing a novel so I hope you like it. The premisse is really simple and you can know this by the title. The purpose of this novel is to relate the days and a slice of the MC's life as an ordinary person in a ordinary world, showing his thoughts and emotions. You may see some grammar errors.If you are enjoying the novel I would appreciate if you do comments or reviews.
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The orc lord raged at the lost of his glaive and angrily threw punches at me. dodging the rapid punches I grab one of his arms and broke it. shocked by his broken arm the orc lord stopped. taking that opportunity I grabbed his head then snapped it. all I had to do now was to finish off the orc warriors. The rest Of the Orc's froze from the death of their leader. Smirking I rushed towards them with lightning speed.
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Ivanka pun membalas ciuman Harry dengan mengimbangi nya dengan indah.
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"I booked a cab awhile ago, it'll be here by now." I just nodded.
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It seemed that she'd throw it towards the window with enough momentum to break it any time now.
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Sui Xiong started to recall his memory.

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